War Over Land
I don’t think It’s good idea. because many people are dying on the war. It just not justified. I have an example. In Iraq many people died and injured for the oil. It is just like trading. when US get the oil, then Iraq people take US soldier’s lifes. I don’t believe people are sharing the land because they still fighting for land, oil or something what is important to their country.
Posted by
at
21:04:09
Jun, you said something that I didn’t really think about before and that is that OIL comes from LAND. So really, by fighting for oil, we are fighting for land. This is scary because oil is getting more and more scarce, so I think countries will start fighting MORE, not less, for oil and other natural resources.
Jun, go back and change your first sentence: I don’t think It’s good idea. because many people are dying on the war. WHAT IS IT? Say the main idea clearly in the first sentence.
This is not a good sentence: because many people are dying on the war. (fix this too:>)
Congratulations, you have NO run-on sentences.